This Week's Practice Exercise
Exercise: In 400 words or less, write a scene in which a character's secret is discovered, and show how that revelation causes others to behave in ways that add to the reader's understanding of the characters concerned.
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People are not always what they seem. They keep secrets, hide skeletons in closets, or don't speak of an illness they have. On a less somber note, they may downplay their wealth or status, or keep an achievement quiet.
When such a secret is revealed, other people react in various ways. Writers can use such a situation to add conflict to a plot and to show their readers more about the characters involved.
An example of such a revelation is found in the movie, "The Test of Love." When her husband survives a plane crash, the stunned wife discovers that he was traveling with another woman, who died in the crash. It turns out the husband had fathered a child by this woman when he and his wife had been separated. This created strife, and forced both parties to reveal characteristics through their actions.
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Exercise: In 400 words or less, write a scene in which a character's secret is discovered, and show how that revelation causes others to behave in ways that add to the reader's understanding of the characters concerned.
Critique by discussing how the revelation changes the perspectives of the characters involved. What is learned about the characters from their response to what has been uncovered? Point out any areas in the writing that can benefit from revision or editing.
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These exercises were written by IWW members and administrators to provide structured practice opportunities for its members. You are welcome to use them for practice as well. Please mention that you found them at the Internet Writers Workshop.
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