Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Notes For November 30th, 2011


This Day In Writing History

On November 30th, 1835, the legendary American writer Mark Twain was born in Florida, Missouri. He was born Samuel Langhorne Clemens, the son of a lawyer and judge. He was the sixth of seven children; only three of his siblings would survive childhood.

When Twain was four years old, his father moved the family to Hannibal, Missouri, a port town on the Mississippi River. Growing up in Hannibal, Twain came to love the town and would model the fictional town of St. Petersberg, Missouri, after it.

Twain's father contracted pneumonia and died when he was eleven years old. A year later, Twain went to work as a printer's devil, (apprentice) where he learned the printing and typesetting trade. By the age of sixteen, he was working as a typesetter and writing articles and humorous pieces for the Hannibal Journal, a newspaper owned by his brother, Orion.

When he turned eighteen, Twain left Hannibal and moved East, living in Cincinnati, Philadelphia, and New York City. He worked as a printer by day and educated himself at night in public libraries. He found a wider spectrum of information available to him in libraries than in conventional schools. He returned to Hannibal four years later.

While traveling by steamboat down the Mississippi to New Orleans, Twain befriended the pilot, Horace E. Bixby, who inspired him to become a steamboat pilot himself. At the time, steamboat piloting was a very prominent and respected position. It also paid well - around $3000 per year, which is equivalent to about $72,000 in today's money. In order to obtain a steamboat pilot's license, one had to go through extensive training.

While Twain was training, his younger brother Henry was killed on another steamboat when it exploded. A month before the explosion, Twain had a dream where his brother died; after he was killed, Twain was racked with guilt, as he had encouraged Henry to train on the ill-fated steamboat and never took the dream seriously. He would develop an interest in parapsychology as a result.

Despite this tragedy, Twain worked as a steamboat pilot on the Mississippi River until 1861, when the Civil War broke out. His famous pen name, Mark Twain, was a term used by steamboat captains to note that the water was at least two fathoms deep, and thus safe to travel on.

Twain's experiences as a steamboat pilot would lead him to write his classic book, Life on the Mississippi (1883), a combination of non-fiction and fiction in which he mixed autobiography and history with folklore.

In 1861, Twain moved out West and joined his brother Orion, who had been appointed secretary to James W. Nye, the governor of the Nevada Territory. To get there, Twain and Orion traveled two weeks by stagecoach across the Great Plains and Rocky Mountains. The trip would inspire him to write his first classic short story, The Celebrated Jumping Frog of Calaveras County (1865), and his famous travelogue, Roughing It (1872).

When they arrived in Virginia City, Nevada, Twain found work as a miner. He failed at mining, so he switched gears and began working as a journalist for the Territorial Enterprise newspaper, where he first used his famous pen name, Mark Twain.

He moved to San Francisco in 1864, where he met famous writers such as Bret Harte, Artemus Ward, Dan DeQuille, and Ina Coolbrith. Twain's first classic short story, The Celebrated Jumping Frog of Calaveras County would be published a year later in The Saturday Press, a weekly literary newspaper based in New York City.

In 1867, Twain was still working as a journalist when a newspaper sponsored him to take a tour of Europe and the Middle East, during which he wrote a series of popular travel letters. These letters would be compiled and published in book form as his classic travelogue, The Innocents Abroad (1869). While on his tour, Twain met Charles Langdon, whose sister, Olivia, he would later marry.

Twain met Olivia in 1868. It was love at first sight, and within two years, they would be married. She bore him a son and three daughters. Twain's son Langdon died at the age of two from diphtheria. His daughter Susy would die suddenly from meningitis at 24. Daughter Jean, an epileptic, would die at 29 after suffering a seizure in the bathtub. Though oldest daughter Clara would live a long life, her relationship with her father was tempestuous and plagued with scandal.

Mark Twain's wife, Olivia, came from a wealthy, liberal, intellectual family, and through them, he met fellow abolitionists, "socialists, principled atheists and activists for women's rights and social equality" including Harriet Beecher Stowe, Frederick Douglass, and the famous utopian socialist, William Dean, who became a lifelong friend.

Olivia's family and their friends would have a strong influence on Twain's philosophy and writings. Although a Presbyterian, Twain was often critical of religion and once quipped that "if Christ were here now there is one thing he would not be – a Christian."

Twain would become most famous for his classic novels such as The Adventures of Tom Sawyer (1876), The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn (1884), The Prince and the Pauper (1882), A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court (1889), The Tragedy of Pudd'nhead Wilson (1894), Eve's Diary (1906), and many others.

The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn (1884), considered by many to be Twain's greatest novel, was attacked for its abolitionist themes when it was first published. The sequel to The Adventures of Tom Sawyer (1876) finds Tom's friend Huckleberry Finn on an adventure of his own. While running away from his guardians, Huck meets Jim, an escaped slave who hopes to make it to Ohio, a free state, and eventually buy his family's freedom so they can join him there.

Through initially opposed to the idea of Jim becoming a free man, when he befriends and travels with him, Huck comes to realize that Jim is a good, intelligent man who deserves to be free. When Jim is betrayed by some grifters and recaptured, Huck helps him escape again even though its against the law to do so - it's considered a form of theft.

Ironically, Twain's novel would be attacked again some seventy years after it was first published - this time for its alleged racism. The NAACP has denounced the novel for its use of the racial epithet nigger and alleged racist stereotyping of blacks.

The novel is often targeted by African-American activists who want it banned from classrooms and school libraries, but Twain scholars point out that the author let his Southern white characters speak their own ugly language as a way of denouncing slavery and the Southern notion that black people were subhuman.

In addition to his writings, Twain was also a lecturer - a speaker in demand all over the world. His lecture tours also helped to establish his reputation as America's greatest humorist and iconoclast. When he ran into financial troubles from bad investments, he would go out on more lecture tours to earn back the money he lost.

During one European tour, Twain was invited to speak as the guest of the Concordia Press Club in Vienna, Austria. In typical Twain style, he gave a speech in German - Die Schrecken der Deutschen Sprache, which means The Horrors of the German Language.

Mark Twain died in 1910 at the age of 74. He will always be remembered as one of the greatest writers of all time and the founding father of American literature.


Quote Of The Day

"Writing is easy. All you have to do is cross out the wrong words." - Mark Twain


Vanguard Video

Today's video features a couple of clips from Hal Holbrook's legendary one-man show, Mark Twain Tonight. Enjoy!



Tuesday, November 29, 2011

IWW Members' Publishing Successes

Internet Writing Workshop members continue to find publishing success in all venues. Congratulations to this week's crew!

Jody

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Barry Basden

"Saved, Nevertheless" has been published in Pure Slush's religion issue. I also answered their odd questionnaire.

Thanks to all who commented on this flash.

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Les Denham

For my brother's birthday present (his birthday was last week) I wrote the narrative of a 5000km drive across Australia we made together in 2007, illustrating it copiously with photos we took, and had it printed as a hardcover, 164-page "coffee table" book by Lulu.com.

At the birthday party the book was handed around and many of the guests asked about getting a copy for themselves. One guest, who is Assistant Manager of an independent bookstore in a rural city in NSW asked if she could get a few copies to sell in her store. As a result I ordered three copies to be shipped to her last night.

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Margaret Hamill

My memoir, Two Small Candles and a Little Pine Tree is now in print in the Dec./Jan. issue of Looking Back Magazine. It's probably available in your local book store, or by subscription.

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Mel Jacob

Sold a Valentine's Day story, but no idea when it will be issued. The publisher wants to put it in an anthology because it's short.

Christmas anthology Warmest Christmas Wishes, Melange Books, is now scheduled Dec 4. So it will be out for Christmas!

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Barbara C. Johnson

Why I didn't sleep with Mitt Romney . . . and . . . exclusive article to be released on Monday, November 21st, 2011.

Thanks to all who helped by critiquing.

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Tom Mahony

My story, Rough N' Tender, is up at Diddledog.

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M. Elaine Moore

My very, very short story, "Possessive," is live today at One Forty Fiction.

My poem, "Thankful," joins Pat. St. Pierre's today at the Camel Saloon.

My teeny, tiny story, "Letting Go," is live at 50 Word Stories.

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Loretta Carrico-Russell

My opinion piece on people who collect recyclables was published today in our local daily. It looks little like the original I submitted and it had to be just 600 words - but it found a home! Thank you to all who helped me with this.

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Bob Sanchez

Sarah Morgan posted a very nice review of Little Mountain, and Rasana Atreya gave five stars to When Pigs Fly.

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Wayne Scheer

My story, "The Revenge of the Words," is up at Eric's Hysterics. Thanks to all who helped with this one.

My flash, "Early Morning Reverie," begun in Practice, has been accepted at Pure Slush. It will be published some time in December.

An old story, "Dauntless," was accepted for the inaugural issue of Sole Literary Magazine of Mary Washington University.

My story, "Quiet Desperation," is up at Fiction365. Thanks to the fine folks at Fiction for their help with this one.

My poem, "A Once-in-a-Lifetime Deal," is up at The Camel Saloon. Alice Folkart is to be held responsible for me thinking I can write poetry.

My flash, "Mysterious Ways," has been accepted by Dead Mule for their December issue. This story began as a Practice exercise.

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Pat St. Pierre

My flash fiction "A Fork in the Road" is up today at www.dailylove.net.

Thanks to all who helped to critique.

My poem "Paths on the Beach" (Nonet style) is posted on the Camel Saloon.

My poem "Ingredients" is up at the Camel Saloon.

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Joanna M. Weston

I have two poems in the annual Constellations: A Journal of Poetry and Fiction, edited by Nina Alonso. It is a very elegant print journal.



Notes For November 29th, 2011


This Day In Writing History

On November 29th, 1832, the legendary American writer Louisa May Alcott was born in Germantown, Pennsylvania. She had three sisters, Anna, Elizabeth, and Abigail, and would base her most famous novel on her experiences growing up with them in New England.

Louisa's father was Amos Bronson Alcott, (who called himself Bronson) a famous teacher and transcendentalist philosopher who belonged to Ralph Waldo Emerson's Transcendentalist Club. In addition to his spiritual beliefs, Bronson shared Emerson's ferocious abolitionist convictions. The Alcott family would host a runaway slave in their home.

In 1840, when she was eight years old, Louisa's father moved the family to Concord, Massachusetts. Growing up in a liberal, intellectual family, she was tutored mostly by her father's friend, legendary writer and philosopher Henry David Thoreau. She also received instruction from Ralph Waldo Emerson and family friends Nathaniel Hawthorne and Margaret Fuller.

Louisa would write of these experiences in an early newspaper article, Transcendental Wild Oats. She would also write of the brief time her family lived in the Utopian Fruitlands commune co-founded by her father. The commune would fail not only because of the members' philosophical extremes, but also due to the severe New England winter for which most of them were unprepared.

Economic hardship would require Louisa to go to work at a very young age, and she worked at such various jobs as governess, seamstress, domestic servant, and occasionally, as a teacher. What she really wanted to be was a writer. Her first book, Flower Fables, was published in 1849, when she was seventeen years old. It was a collection of short stories originally written for Ralph Waldo Emerson's young daughter, Ellen. A year later, she began writing for Atlantic Monthly magazine.

When the Civil War broke out in 1861, Louisa served as a Union hospital nurse, caring for wounded and sick soldiers in Georgetown, D.C. She wrote vivid detailed letters home chronicling her experiences. These letters would be revised and published in the Commonwealth newspaper. When they appeared in book form as Hospital Sketches (1863), they brought their author to the attention of critics, who praised her talent.

While she worked to build her career as a writer of traditional fiction, Louisa also wrote sensational, passionate stories and novels strictly for money. They were published under the pseudonym of A.M. Bernard. These early novels were torrid Gothic potboilers with titles like Behind a Mask, or A Woman's Power, A Long Fatal Love Chase, and Pauline's Passion and Punishment. One novel she published anonymously was called A Modern Mephistopheles.

When her collections of children's stories became successful, Louisa was able to devote herself to traditional fiction. In 1868, she published her most famous novel. Originally intended for young adult readers, it would prove to be not only a critical and commercial success, but also one of the great classic works of American literature.

Little Women told the story of the four March sisters, (Jo, Meg, Beth, and Amy) growing up in Concord, Massachusetts, was based on Alcott's experiences growing up with her own three sisters in Concord and Boston. Louisa modeled the character of Jo after herself.

Fifteen-year-old Jo March is the second oldest of the sisters. Intelligent, outspoken, and tomboyish, Jo longs to be a writer. An early feminist, Jo finds herself at odds with the restrictions placed on women in the late 19th century, including not being able to go to college and being pressured to marry.

Through the course of the novel, the March sisters become friends with Theodore "Laurie" Laurence, the handsome, charming, affluent boy next door. An orphan, Laurie lives with his grandfather. He becomes especially close to Jo. They get into various scrapes as Laurie joins in the March sisters' adventures.

The sisters also struggle to overcome their particular character flaws (Jo has a temper, Meg is vain, Beth is shy, and Amy selfish) in order to live up to their parents' expectations and become, well, little women.

The first part of Little Women became a huge hit with both critics and readers, and an overnight sensation, selling over 2,000 copies in 1868. Louisa May Alcott received many letters from fans (and visits from them at her home) clamoring for a sequel.

So, in 1869, Alcott published the second part, Good Wives. Although her fans were begging for Jo to get married - especially to Laurie - she initially resisted the idea, believing that Jo should remain a "literary spinster."

Louisa changed her mind, and in Good Wives, married off not only Jo, but Meg and Amy as well. However, in a surprising twist, Jo marries Friedrich "Fritz" Bhaer, the poor German immigrant and professor who encouraged her to be a serious writer, while Amy eventually marries Laurie.

Louisa would later write, "Jo should have remained a literary spinster, but so many enthusiastic young ladies wrote to me clamorously demanding that she should marry Laurie, or somebody, that I didn't dare refuse and out of perversity went and made a funny match for her."

As for her own spinsterhood, in an interview with literary critic Louise Chandler Moulton, she joked that the reason she herself was a spinster was because she had "fallen in love with so many pretty girls and never once the least bit with any man."

In reality, while traveling through Europe, she'd had a passionate romance with a young man named Ladislas Wisniewski, whom she called Laddie. He was a Polish freedom fighter she'd met in Switzerland. She would base the character of Laurie on Laddie. Though Louisa had written of her affair with Laddie in her journal, she tore out those pages prior to her death.

Little Women would be followed by two sequels: Little Men (1871) and Jo's Boys (1886). Louisa would write more memorable novels including Eight Cousins (1875), Under The Lilacs (1878), and Jack and Jill: A Village Story (1880).

Louisa May Alcott suffered from chronically poor health in her later years, which she attributed to mercury poisoning from a typhoid fever treatment. She ultimately died of a stroke in March of 1888 at the age of 55. Although her early biographers had agreed with her assessment of mercury poisoning, a more recent analysis of her chronic illness indicated that she most likely suffered from lupus.


Quote Of The Day

“Keep good company, read good books, love good things and cultivate soul and body as faithfully as you can." - Louisa May Alcott


Vanguard Video

Today's video features writer Susan Cheever discussing her biography of Louisa May Alcott. Enjoy!

Sunday, November 27, 2011

This Week's Practice Exercise

Caught in the Act
Prepared by: Alice Folkart
Posted on: November 27, 2011

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In 400 words or less write a scene in which someone is 'caught in the act.' Focus on the emotions of the person who discovers what is going on and of the person who is caught. Your scene could rely heavily on description and inner dialogue, or it could give you an opportunity to use dialogue to provide back story. You could open your scene with the 'catching,' or build up to it.

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The 'act' can be something good or something not so good: a child swiping a cookie from the cookie jar, someone doing an anonymous good turn, or a jewel thief helping herself to diamonds, the church secretary taking a cut of the tithes. The scene could show a wife catching her husband in an act that is not what she expected to find—she might be suspecting that her husband is fooling around with her best friend, but when she confronts them, she finds that they're planning a surprise party for her.

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In 400 words or less write a scene in which someone is 'caught in the act.' Focus on the emotions of the person who discovers what is going on and of the person who is caught. Your scene could rely heavily on description and inner dialogue, or it could give you an opportunity to use dialogue to provide back story. You could open your scene with the 'catching,' or build up to it.

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In your critique, consider whether the writer elicits your sympathy for any of the characters, and whether the surprise of catching someone at something is well set up. From the details of this short scene are you able to imagine what went before and might come after. Would you read more?


These exercises were written by IWW members and administrators to provide structured practice opportunities for its members. You are welcome to use them for practice as well. Please mention that you found them at the Internet Writing Workshop.

Friday, November 25, 2011

Notes For November 25th, 2011


This Day In Writing History

On November 25th, 1952, The Mousetrap, the famous play by legendary British mystery writer Agatha Christie, opened in London at the Ambassadors Theatre.

The play, a murder mystery, was Christie's adaptation of her own short story, Three Blind Mice. It was first adapted as a radio play, performed on May 30th, 1947, in honor of the 80th birthday of England's Queen Mary.

For the stage version, Agatha Christie had to change the title because there was another play running at the time called Three Blind Mice, and the author of that work, Emile Littler, didn't want Christie's play confused with his.

The title The Mousetrap was suggested by Christie's son-in-law, Anthony Hicks, who observed that it was Hamlet's metaphoric description of the play he uses to "catch the conscience of the King."

In Agatha Christie's deliciously macabre play, a young couple, Giles and Mollie Ralston, have turned the old Monkswell Manor into a successful hotel. One winter day, the Ralstons find themselves snowed in with some guests and a stranded traveler who ran his car into a snowbank.

A policeman, Detective Sergeant Trotter, arrives on skis to warn everyone that a murderer is on the loose and headed for the hotel. When one of the guests (Mrs. Boyle) is killed, the others realize that the murderer is already there. Detective Sergeant Trotter begins his investigation.

Suspicion first falls on the obviously troubled Christopher Wren, but soon it seems that any one of the snowed-in group could be the murderer. As the play progresses, we learn that the murderer's first victim was a woman who served time in prison for abusing the three foster children placed in her care.

The body count continues, the plot thickens, and red herrings abound. Detective Sergeant Trotter plans to set a trap for the killer. Finally, in a shocking surprise twist ending, the murderer is revealed to be...

What, did you think I was going to tell you and ruin the play? Traditionally, after the play ends at the theater, the audience is asked not to reveal the identity of the murderer to those who haven't seen the play. I'm going to observe that tradition. You'll have to see the play for yourself to find out "who done it" and why.

The Mousetrap holds the record for the longest initial run of any play in history, with over 24,000 performances and counting. When the play made its debut in 1952, the original cast featured Sir Richard Attenborough as Detective Sergeant Trotter and his wife, Sheila Sim, as Mollie Ralston. In 1974, after 9,000 performances, the production was moved to St. Martin's Theatre, where it still runs today.


Quote Of The Day

"I specialize in murders of quiet, domestic interest." - Agatha Christie


Vanguard Video

Today's video features the promotional trailer for a recent production of The Mousetrap by the Spotlight Theatre Company in Denver, Colorado. Enjoy!


Thursday, November 24, 2011

Notes For November 24th, 2011


This Day In Writing History

On November 24th, 1859, The Origin Of Species, the famous scientific textbook by Charles Darwin, was published. Its full title was On The Origin Of Species By Means Of Natural Selection, or The Preservation Of Favoured Races In The Struggle For Life. When the sixth edition of the book was published in 1872, the title was shortened to The Origin Of Species.

Charles Darwin was a brilliant English scientist, a former medical student turned biologist who had previously published textbook studies of subjects such as fossils, volcanic islands, and coral reefs. With The Origin Of Species, he laid down the groundwork for his theories of evolution, which, although accepted by the scientific community, remain controversial to this day.

The main theme of The Origin Of Species is natural selection - the process of evolution whereby organisms acquire heritable traits that make it more likely that the organisms will survive and reproduce - traits that allow organisms to adapt to their environment. This was nothing new to science; theories of natural selection go back to the ancient Greek thinkers and philosophers, from Empedocles to Aristotle.

What made Charles Darwin's study of natural selection revolutionary - and controversial - were his theories of evolution concerning common ancestry of species. In the late 18th century, Darwin's grandfather, Erasmus Darwin, proposed a similar theory of how, through evolution, one species can become another.

In 1809, French scientist Jean-Baptiste Lamarck took the idea further with his theory of the transmutation of species. But it was Charles Darwin's landmark study that defined this aspect of evolution as we know it today.

In the mid-19th century, when he published The Origin Of Species, the scientific community in Britain was closely tied to the Church of England. Reactions to Darwin's book were sharply mixed.

Liberal clergymen accepted Darwin's theories, declaring evolution to be God's plan of creation. Conservative (fundamentalist) clergymen decried evolution as blasphemous, taking the Bible's book of Genesis to be the literal truth and scientific fact, calling this "science" creationism.

Creationism and evolution would clash most famously in the Scopes Monkey Trial of 1925. John Scopes, a high school science teacher from Tennessee, had been charged with violating that state's Butler Act.

The Butler Act made it unlawful to "teach any theory that denies the story of the Divine Creation of man as taught in the Bible, and to teach instead that man has descended from a lower order of animals" in any state-funded school or university.

Despite a brilliant defense mounted by legendary attorney Clarence Darrow, Scopes was convicted and fined $100, the equivalent of about $1,200 in today's money. The case was appealed to the Tennessee State Supreme Court, which affirmed the conviction, but threw out the fine on a technicality.

The Butler Act would remain on the books in Tennessee until it was voluntarily repealed in 1967. A year later, in the precedent-setting case of Epperson vs. Arkansas, the United States Supreme Court ruled that state's law forbidding the teaching of evolution unconstitutional.

The hotly contested battle between creationism and evolution, which began with the publication of The Origin Of Species 150 years ago, continues to this day.


Quote Of The Day

"The mystery of the beginning of all things is insoluble by us; and I for one must be content to remain an agnostic." - Charles Darwin


Vanguard Video

Today's video features a reading from Charles Darwin's The Origin Of Species, performed by British writer Richard Dawkins. Enjoy!


Wednesday, November 23, 2011

Notes For November 23rd, 2011


This Day In Writing History

On November 23rd, 1874, Far From The Madding Crowd, the famous novel by the legendary English writer Thomas Hardy, was published in London. It appeared in a serialized format, published by Cornhill Magazine, which at the time was the main rival of All The Year Round, the literary magazine founded by Charles Dickens.

Far From The Madding Crowd is not only one of the greatest love stories ever written, it's also a classic tale of rural English life during the Victorian era. It tells a tale of true love complicated and delayed by stubbornness, pride, and circumstance.

Gabriel Oak is a successful sheep farmer nearing thirty years of age who falls in love with Bathsheba Everdene, a proud, vain, determined, and independent woman eight years his junior who has come to live with her aunt.

Bathsheba grows close to Gabriel - she even saves his life - but when he proposes marriage, she refuses, as she values her independence more than his love. She moves away miles out of town. When Bathsheba and Gabriel are reunited sometime later, things have changed drastically for both of them. Gabriel is ruined when an inexperienced sheepdog runs his flock over the edge of a cliff.

After being forced to sell off all his possessions to settle his debts, Gabriel wanders about looking for work. He happens upon a dangerous fire ravaging a farm and helps to put it out. When the owner of the farm comes over to thank him, it turns out to be Bathsheba, who inherited her uncle's estate. In need of a capable shepherd, she hires Gabriel, although it makes her uncomfortable.

Bathsheba has another admirer - a lonely, repressed, middle-aged farmer named William Boldwood. She decides to play a joke on him and sends him a valentine with the words "Marry Me" written on it. Boldwood, not realizing that it's just a joke, proposes marriage.

Bathsheba doesn't love him, but toys with the idea of marrying him. Despite his shortcomings, he's also affluent and the most eligible bachelor in town. However, she puts off giving him an answer and plays with his affections. When Gabriel finds out, he chides Bathsheba for her thoughtlessness. She fires him.

Later, when bloat threatens to kill all of her sheep, Bathsheba is finally forced to swallow her pride and beg Gabriel for help. He saves her flock, she hires him back, and they become friends again.

Soon, however, Bathsheba falls for a dashing soldier, Sgt. Francis "Frank" Troy. Gabriel tries to discourage her from marrying him, telling her that she'd be better of with William Boldwood. In love with Troy, Bathsheba elopes with him.

When they return from their honeymoon, Troy is approached by Boldwood, who offers him a huge bribe in exchange for Bathsheba. He refuses, and Boldwood vows revenge.

Unfortunately for Bathsheba, her gallant husband soon shows his true colors - he's a compulsive gambler in love with another woman, Fanny Robin. He was going to marry her, but she accidentally went to the wrong church. Humiliated and mistakenly believing that she jilted him, he called off the wedding, not knowing that Fanny was pregnant with his child.

Months later, Troy meets Fanny on the road. A destitute wreck about to give birth, Troy takes pity on her and gives her all the money he has on him. He plans to support her and their child, but she dies in childbirth, along with the baby.

Gabriel tries to conceal all of this from Bathsheba, but she finds out and has the coffin brought to her house. She opens it and sees both mother and child. Troy kisses Fanny's corpse and tells Bathsheba, "This woman is more to me, dead as she is, than ever you were, or are, or can be." Then he leaves her.

Troy takes a long walk to the coast, strips off his clothes, and bathes in the ocean. A riptide carries him out to sea and he's presumed dead.

William Boldwood still determines to marry Bathsheba. This time, out of guilt over all the pain she's caused him, (and others) she agrees to marry him in a few years, when she can have her husband declared legally dead. What she doesn't know is that he's still alive.

When Troy learns that Boldwood has forced Bathsheba to marry him, he returns on Christmas Eve to claim her. He finds her at Boldwood's house and she screams in horror when she sees him.

Boldwood, refusing to give her up, shoots Troy and kills him. He attempts suicide and is later sentenced to hang. Boldwood's death sentence is commuted on the grounds of insanity after his friends petition the Home Secretary for mercy.

Through all of her tribulations, Bathsheba came to rely more and more on her oldest and dearest friend, Gabriel Oak. But one day, he gives notice that he's resigning from her employ. She presses him for an explanation and he reluctantly admits that he's quitting to protect her good name, as people are gossiping that he wants to marry her.

Bathsheba finally realizes that he is the only one who ever truly cared about her - the only one who really loved her. When he summons the courage to ask for her hand again, she accepts without hesitation, and they quietly marry.

A huge hit with Victorian readers and critics, Far From the Madding Crowd would become an all-time classic novel, adapted for the stage, screen, radio, and television. Thomas Hardy would write more classic novels, including Tess of the d'Urbervilles (1891) and Jude the Obscure. (1895)


Quote Of The Day

"The business of the poet and the novelist is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." - Thomas Hardy


Vanguard Video

Today's video features the original theatrical trailer for the acclaimed 1967 feature film adaptation of Far From the Madding Crowd, directed by John Schlesinger, featuring Julie Christie as Bathsheba Everdene and Alan Bates as Gabriel Oak. Enjoy!

Tuesday, November 22, 2011

Notes For November 22nd, 2011


This Day In Writing History

On November 22nd, 1819, the legendary English novelist Mary Anne Evans, best known by her male pen name George Eliot, was born in Warwickshire, England. Growing up, she had more formal education than most girls in the Victorian era. She was an intellectually gifted child and a voracious reader. Her father invested in her education partly because he feared that her homely looks would most likely prevent her from landing a husband.

Mary Anne's father was the manager of Arbury Hall, a magnificent estate belonging to the aristocratic Newdigate family. Because of his position, she was granted access to the estate's formidable library of books, which she used to educate herself from the age of sixteen. Her visits to Arbury Hall exposed her to the stark contrast between the lives of the rich and the poor, which would influence her writing.

Around this time Mary Anne's mother died, so she served as her father's housekeeper and cook. When her brother Isaac married, he and his new wife took over the family home. Mary Anne and her father moved to a new home near Coventry. There, she was introduced to Coventry society, and struck up a friendship with Charles and Cara Bray, a wealthy couple known for their philanthropy and reputation as progressive free thinkers.

Through the Brays, Mary Anne Evans was introduced to the great philosophers and writers of the day, including Ralph Waldo Emerson, Robert Owen, Harriet Martineau, and Herbert Spencer. She also met liberal theologians with whom she explored her simmering discontent with the conservative, evangelical Anglican beliefs her father raised her with. When she began questioning the literal truth of the Bible, her father threatened to kick her out of his home.

Mary Anne's father never followed through with his threats. She continued to serve as his cook and housekeeper until he died in 1849. She was 30 years old at the time. A few days after his funeral, she accompanied her friends the Brays on a trip to Switzerland. She decided to remain in Geneva rather than return home with the Brays. There, she was befriended by French artist Francois d'Albert Durade and his wife, Juliet. Francois painted a portrait of her.

The following year, Mary Anne returned to England. Sometimes known as Marian, she began using the name Marian Evans. She determined to become a writer. She stayed with her old friend John Chapman, a radical publisher. She would become the assistant editor of his liberal literary magazine, The Westminster Review. It was unheard for a woman to become a magazine editor during the Victorian era, and her living arrangement with John Chapman would add more fuel to the fire of scandal. The worst was yet to come.

A few years later, in 1854, Mary Anne Evans moved in with George Henry Lewes, a philosopher and critic whom she had met three years earlier. She had finally found her true love, but there was a catch: Lewes was married. He and his wife Agnes had an open marriage. They also had seven children, four of which had been sired by Agnes' lover, Thornton Leigh Hunt. Since Lewes had named himself as the father of Hunt's children on their birth certificates knowing that they were not his, he couldn't divorce Agnes. If he did, he would be considered an accomplice to her adultery and subject to criminal prosecution under British law.

Although they never did marry, Mary Anne and George Henry Lewes considered themselves husband and wife, and lived together as such. Mary Anne even used George's last name. After enjoying what she considered to be her honeymoon in Germany, she resumed her career, editing and writing for The Westminster Review. What she really wanted to be was a novelist. Knowing that women writers in the Victorian era were either derided or not taken seriously, she took the pen name George Eliot.

Mary Anne's first novel, Adam Bede, was published in 1859. Her tale of a handsome young squire in a rural English town caught up in a love "rectangle" who finally realizes who his true love really is became an instant hit. Suddenly, everyone was talking about this new and talented writer named George Eliot whose true identity was a mystery. Speculation about who he might be spread like wildfire. When a failed writer named Joseph Liggins claimed that he was George Eliot and took credit for her work, Mary Anne Evans came forward and proved that she was the real George Eliot.

It wasn't long before word got out about Mary Anne's scandalous relationship with George Henry Lewes. While most of her readers were shocked, her popularity wasn't affected. Neither was her talent, as she continued to write great novels. Two of her best known, classic novels were Silas Marner (1861) and Middlemarch (1871-72).

Silas Marner told the story of the title character, a weaver living in a small town in Northern England in the early 19th century. When Marner is falsely accused of stealing from the Calvinist congregation he belongs to, he's kicked out of Church. His fiancee breaks up with him and marries another man.

Heartbroken, Marner leaves town and settles in the village of Raveloe, where he becomes a bitter, miserly recluse obsessed with gold coins, which he hoards in his home. When someone breaks in and steals all of his gold, Marner sinks into a deep depression. Then, one cold winter night, he finds something far more precious than gold - a golden-haired two-year-old girl who wanders into his home. He follows her tracks in the snow and finds her mother dead of exposure.

Silas Marner decides to adopt the orphaned little girl and names her Eppie after his mother and sister. In raising his loving daughter, Marner's broken heart finally heals. Eppie grows up to be a fine and respected young woman. When the secret of her true parentage is revealed, Eppie's biological father offers her a life of luxury as a gentleman's daughter. She politely refuses, telling him that she could never be happy without her real father - Silas Marner.

Middlemarch would prove to be "George Eliot's" magnum opus - a 900+ page epic novel published in several volumes. The English historical novel, which takes place from 1830-32, would establish the author's reputation as one of the most accurate chroniclers of rural English life in the early Victorian era. This brilliant, classic novel remains to this day one of the most popular works of English literature ever written.

In 1877, five years after the publication of Middlemarch, Mary Anne Evans was introduced to one of her biggest fans, Princess Louise - the daughter of Queen Victoria. Her admiration and acceptance by the royal family squelched the flames of her scandalous personal life. She would court scandal again in 1880, when, two years after the death of her lover George Henry Lewes from illness, she married John Cross, a man twenty years her junior.

Her new husband was supposedly mentally unstable, and when he had an accident during their honeymoon in Venice - he fell off their hotel balcony into the Grand Canal - some speculated that he had attempted suicide. Whatever the cause, John Cross survived. He and Mary Anne returned to England and settled into a new home in Chelsea. Unfortunately, she soon fell ill with a throat infection. She had been suffering from kidney disease for a few years, so the throat infection took a toll on her frail health.

Mary Anne Evans, aka George Eliot, died on December 22nd, 1880, at the age of 61.


Quote Of The Day

“The responsibility of tolerance lies in those who have the wider vision.” - George Eliot (Mary Anne Evans)


Vanguard Video

Today's video features a reading for George Eliot's classic debut novel, Adam Bede. Enjoy!

Sunday, November 20, 2011

This Week's Practice Exercise

Imaginings (Version 2)
Prepared by: Don Mackenzie
Revised and Reposted on: 20 November 2011

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Exercise: In 400 words or less, show us a character whose imagination has a particularly significant effect, either within the story or on the reader.

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Dreaming or imagining is a natural function of ordinary and creative life. A person may be trying to take him or herself out of an uncomfortable situation, or imagining the steps she or he needs to take to achieve a victory.

Dreaming/imagining can also be an activity that sneaks up on a character. It may undermine intentions or point the way to new success.

Dreaming/imagining is a powerful force that writers should be encouraged to explore, but caution is needed. The revelation "it was all a dream" is one of the most offensive devices in fiction. Readers object when they feel they have been tricked and the contract between writer and reader has been broken. Surprises are wonderful, but the reader must feel properly prepared and the surprise must be appropriate.

"All men dream, but not equally. Those who dream by night in the dusty recesses of their minds wake in the day to find that it was vanity: but the dreamers of the day are dangerous men, for they may act their dream with open eyes, to make it possible."--T. E. Lawrence, "Seven Pillars of Wisdom"

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Exercise: In 400 words or less, show us a character whose imagination has a particularly significant effect, either within the story or on the reader.

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When critiquing, explain whether the author found it easy or difficult to draw the line between what was real and what was imagined. Was the writing believable or insightful? Are the characters and the setting well drawn?


These exercises were written by IWW members and administrators to provide structured practice opportunities for its members. You are welcome to use them for practice as well. Please mention that you found them at the Internet Writing Workshop.

Friday, November 18, 2011

Notes For November 18th, 2011


This Day In Writing History

On November 18th, 1939, the legendary Canadian writer Margaret Atwood was born in Ottawa, Ontario, Canada. Her father was an entomologist, her mother a dietitian and nutritionist. As a result of her father's research in forest entomology, Margaret spent most of her childhood in the backwoods of Northern Quebec.

Although she didn't attend school full-time until she was eleven years old, from a young age, she was a voracious reader, with a special interest in Grimm's fairy tales, pocketbook mysteries, animal stories and comic books.

Margaret began writing her own stories at the age of six. As a teenager, she realized she wanted to be a professional writer. She attended Leaside High School in Leaside, Toronto, from which she graduated in 1957.

After graduation, Margaret enrolled at Victoria University in the University of Toronto, where she earned a B.A. degree in English. She had minored in philosophy and French. In 1961, the year she graduated from Victoria University, Margaret's first book, a poetry collection titled Double Persephone, was published. The privately printed book won its author the E.J. Pratt Medal.

With a Woodrow Wilson fellowship, Margaret enrolled at Radcliffe College to begin her graduate studies. The following year, she earned a Master's degree. From there, she pursued more graduate studies at Harvard, but dropped out two years later, never completing her dissertation on "The English Metaphysical Romance."

She has taught English at many universities, including the University of British Columbia (1965), Sir George Williams University in Montreal (1967-68), the University of Alberta (1969-79), and York University in Toronto (1971-72).

In 1969, Margaret Atwood's first novel was published. The Edible Woman was a bold, brilliant, experimental allegory that established her as a major talent. It told the story of Marian McAlpin, a market researcher whose sane, structured, consumer-oriented world falls out of focus and becomes a surreal nightmare of existential, feminist angst after her boyfriend, Peter Wollander, proposes marriage.

Food seems to take on human qualities, and Marian finds herself unable to eat because she identifies with it - she believes that, in asking her to marry him, Peter wants to metaphorically devour her. So, she bakes a cake in the shape of a woman and offers it to Peter as a substitute. He walks out and Marian eats the cake.

Margaret would continue exploring both existentialist and feminist themes in her novels Surfacing (1972), Lady Oracle (1976), and Life Before Man (1979). Her 1981 novel, Bodily Harm, features a unique heroine: a journalist and breast cancer survivor who gets caught up in violent civil unrest on an island in the Caribbean. Her next novel would become a celebrated classic of science fiction, though she considered it speculative fiction.

The Handmaid's Tale (1985) is set in the future, in the Republic of Gilead, a country that used to be the United States, until a violent military coup by Christian extremists killed the President in a terrorist attack, then ousted the Congress and abolished the Constitution.

The Republic of Gilead is a racist, chauvinist, totalitarian Christian theocracy - a regime of social and religious orthodoxy inspired by the Old Testament installed in response to a declining population (due to infertility) and a marked lack of "values."

In this dystopian society, sex is considered fundamentally degrading, so men must abstain from all forms of sex except marital intercourse for the purpose of procreation. Sex is allowed outside of marriage for reproductive purposes if one's wife is sterile. In this case, a married man may keep concubines called "handmaids" for breeding. Of course, this Christian theocratic model society is rife with hypocrisy and cruelty.

The elite men who rule the Republic employ Jezebels - prostitutes who work at unofficial state-run brothels. Although abortion is a crime, babies born with any kind of defect mysteriously vanish not long after their birth and are never seen again.

Widows, nuns, and dissident women (and handmaids who fail to conceive a child after a certain period of time) are exiled. Older, infertile women are forced into lives of domestic servitude. Homosexuality is a crime punishable by death or a long, torturous prison term.

The novel-within-a-novel is part straightforward narrative, part experimental, stream-of-consciousness narrative. It's mostly told by a handmaid, Offred - a slave name that means "Of Fred," as she is a concubine who belongs to her master, Fred.

Offred's testament of her life in the Republic of Gilead, recorded on a series of unnumbered cassette tapes, is transcribed sometime in the distant future by two professors who arrange the tapes in "probable order." The transcription is left unfinished.

The Handmaid's Tale won many awards: the 1985 Governor General's Award, the 1986 Nebula Award, the 1986 Booker Prize, and the 1987 Prometheus Award. It also won the very first Arthur C. Clarke Award in 1987.

The novel was adapted in 1990 as an acclaimed feature film directed by legendary German film maker Volker Schlondorff, working from a screenplay by Harold Pinter. Schlondorff is best known for his brilliant and stunning 1979 adaptation of legendary German writer Gunter Grass' classic antifascist allegorical novel, The Tin Drum (1959).

Margaret Atwood continued to write great novels, many of which won awards. In 2003, she ventured again into science fiction with her classic novel Oryx and Crake. Set in a post- apocalyptic world where there are only two classes of people - the very rich and the very poor - and genetic engineering has gone out of control, resulting in the crossbreeding of humans and animals.

Crake is a brilliant geneticist who plans to wipe out the destructive human race and replace it with Crakers, which are peaceful, environmentally friendly human-like creatures. Crake is obsessed with Oryx, a mysterious Asian woman whom he thinks he recognizes from a pornographic film she performed in when she was a young girl. He hires Oryx for sexual services and to be a teacher for the Crakers, but she soon becomes his lover.

Although best known for her novels, Margaret Atwood's large body of work includes poetry collections, short story collections, children's books, and non-fiction. Her first non-fiction work was a seminal literary criticism titled Survival: A Thematic Guide To Canadian Literature (1972). She has also written for television.

Her latest novel, The Year Of The Flood, published in September 2009, is a sequel to Oryx And Crake. She lives in Ontario, dividing her time between Toronto and Pelee Island.


Quote Of The Day

"You need a certain amount of nerve to be a writer." - Margaret Atwood


Vanguard Video

Today's video features Margaret Atwood discussing her writings on the UCTV (University of California Television) program, Revelle Forum, in 2004. Enjoy!


Thursday, November 17, 2011

Notes For November 17th, 2011


This Day In Writing History

On November 17th, 1993, The Shipping News, the classic novel by the famous American writer Annie Proulx, won the National Book Award. It wasn't the first award her writing received; her previous (and first) novel, Postcards (1992) won the PEN / Faulkner Award.

The Shipping News is the moving chronicle of Quoyle, a man who faces unexpected and tragic twists and turns in his life and struggles to move on.

First, Quoyle's parents commit suicide, then his unfaithful and abusive wife Petal abducts their young daughters and runs off with her lover. After Petal sells her children to a black market adoption agency for six thousand dollars, she and her lover are killed in a car accident.

Later, the police find Quoyle's daughters and they are returned to him, safe and sound. Unfortunately, his life is falling apart.

Quoyle's eccentric aunt, Agnis Hamm, (his father's sister) pays an unexpected visit and convinces him to take the girls and return to the family's ancestral home in Newfoundland, (his father had emigrated to upstate New York) located on Quoyle's Point. There, he could make a fresh start.

In Newfoundland, Quoyle takes a job as a car accident reporter for the Gammy Bird, the local newspaper of Killick-Claw. (Quoyle had previously worked for a newspaper in New York.)

The editor also assigns him to cover the shipping news - the arrivals and departures at the local port. This results in Quoyle writing a series of popular articles on boats of interest in the harbor.

As he tries to make a new life for himself in Newfoundland, Quoyle makes new friends within the community and falls in love with a local woman named Wavey. Quoyle finds his emotional strength and self-confidence growing - both of which he'll need, as disturbing secrets about his family history begin to emerge.

A year after it won the National Book Award, The Shipping News won its author a Pulitzer Prize for Fiction. In 2001, the novel would be adapted as an acclaimed feature film, directed by legendary Swedish filmmaker Lasse Hallstrom. It starred Kevin Spacey as Quoyle, Julianne Moore as Wavey, and Dame Judi Dench as Aunt Agnis.

Annie Proulx would become most famous for her acclaimed short story, Brokeback Mountain, which would be adapted as an Academy Award winning feature film in 2005.


Quote Of The Day

"You should write because you love the shape of stories and sentences, and the creation of different words on a page. Writing comes from reading, and reading is the finest teacher of how to write." - Annie Proulx


Vanguard Video

Today's video features the original theatrical trailer for the acclaimed 2001 feature film adaptation of The Shipping News. Enjoy!


Wednesday, November 16, 2011

Notes For November 16th, 2011


This Day In Writing History

On November 16th, 1913, Swann's Way, the first volume of A la Recherche du Temps Perdu, (In Search of Lost Time, aka Remembrance of Things Past) the famous epic novel by legendary French writer Marcel Proust, was published. Clocking in at nearly 1.5 million words, A la Recherche du Temps Perdu is one of the longest novels ever written.

When Proust began work on A la Recherche du Temps Perdu in 1909, he planned to publish it as a series of seven volumes. It took him over ten years to complete the series. He died while editing his finished drafts of the last three volumes, so his brother Robert finished the revisions (working from Marcel's notes) and published them posthumously.

After completing the first volume of his epic novel, Swann's Way, Proust submitted the manuscript to several publishers, all of whom rejected it. One editor complained about some minor syntax errors, while another told the author, "My dear fellow, I may be dead from the neck up, but rack my brains as I may I can't see why a chap should need 30 pages to describe how he turns over in bed before going to sleep."

Proust's writing style was experimental in nature - dense and lyrical prose rich in symbolism and philosophy, eschewing plot in favor of a non-linear narrative. In his novel, he was obsessed with the nature of memories, which are recalled in incredibly rich detail. Its style was in complete contrast with the plot-driven novels of the time. This may have contributed to its initial rejection.

Some believe it had more to do with the fact that Proust, who was gay, wrote openly and honestly about homosexuality at a time when it was not only despised by society but also illegal - a crime punishable by imprisonment. His narrator in A la Recherche du Temps Perdu is not gay, but other characters are and homosexuality is a recurring theme.

Unfazed by the rejection of Swann's Way by publishers, Proust raised the money to publish the novel himself. It made him famous. Scholars have proclaimed A la Recherche du Temps Perdu to be one of the greatest modern novels ever written.

The legendary Russian novelist Vladimir Nabokov named it as one of the greatest prose works of the 20th century, along with James Joyce's Ulysses and Franz Kafka's The Metamorphosis. W. Somerset Maugham called it "the greatest fiction to date."

In 2002, Penguin Books published a new English translation of A la Recherche du Temps Perdu. Edited by Christopher Prendergast, it's a collaboration of seven different translators.


Quote Of The Day

"Reading is at the threshold of the spiritual life; it can introduce us to it. It does not constitute it ... There are certain cases of spiritual depression in which reading can become a sort of curative discipline ... reintroducing a lazy mind into the life of the Spirit." - Marcel Proust


Vanguard Video

Today's video features a reading of Marcel Proust's classic novel, Swann's Way. Enjoy!

Tuesday, November 15, 2011

IWW Members' Publishing Successes

Internet Writing Workshop members are heading into the holidays with a number of publishing successes across many venues.

Congratulations to our latest batch of members who secured some well deserved bragging rights -- and this on top of [for some of them] also participating this month in the annual NaNoWriMo Novel Writing contest!

Jody

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Bill Backstrom

My flash, "Born Again" is up today at One Forty Fiction.

Story: Parson spread the word: be born again. His daughter also spread and he caught us. After the shotgun blast perhaps I will be born again.

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Barry Basden

My poem, "Sensual Aging," is in the November 2011 Issue of Red River Review. Thanks to all still here who helped this oldie find a home.

Read seven hint fictions at Nailpolish Stories. The OPI colors are great prompts.

My wearable fiction, "Scope," is walking around NYC this week, sponsored by Safety Pin Review.

Sherman Alexie and Margaret Atwood have praised and tweeted about this new, unique little magazine.

Great fun.

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Mel Jacob

I have the following book reviews up at SFREVu.com:

  • When the Saints by Dave Duncan - Fantasy with magic in an Alternate world c. 1500s where Church politics and an invasion play a role.
  • Wolf Among the Stars by Steve White - Space Oater with warfare between aliens and Earth allies.
  • The Doomsday Vault: A Novel of the Clockwork Empire by Steven Harper - Steampunk and the clockwork plague.
  • I, Robot: To Protect by Mickey Zucker - Protesters are out to destroy all technology related to robots.
I also have these book reviews up at GumshoeReview.com
  • Troubled Bones: A Medieval Noir by Jeri Westerson - A former knight tries to protect the Becket's bones and solve a murder.
  • The Temple Mount Code by Charles Brokaw - Extremists seek a copy of the Koran written by Mohamed to pursue jihad on the West.
  • To Catch a Leaf: A Flower Shop Mystery by Kate Collins - Murder mystery set in a flower shop where flowers provide a vital clue.
  • Who Do, Voodoo? (A Mind for Murder Mystery) by Rochelle Staab - The murder of a self-proclaimed Voodoo priestess and the curse she left behind require care to resolve.
  • No Child of Mine by Kelly Irvin - Police seek to recover a kidnapped child and also solve the five-year old murder of another.
  • Saint's Gate by Carla Neggers - An ex-nun, now an FBI agent tries to catch a killer and art thief.
  • Sahara Dust by John Ingraham - A Florida deputy sheriff has to battle NCIS and the FBI to solve the murder of a former NCIS agent and stop a weapons sale to Middle Easterners.
Additionally, I sold my short story "Saving Christmas," to Melange Books for an anthology, Warmest Wishes for Christmas. However, they are releasing after Christmas for some reason--guess they had trouble getting enough Christmas stories early enough. Oh, well, maybe next year. While my story culminates on Christmas Day, it is universal.

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Mark Kline

My translation of Naja Marie Aidt's story, "Wounds," is in the current issue of Ecotone. The story is from her collection that won the Nordic Council's Literary Prize -- Scandinavia's top literary award. Ecotone is relatively new lit mag, but its stories have already appeared in many anthologies and they attract well known writers. Unfortunately, their website shows only excerpts.

This is a paying market.

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Bill LaFond

My story, "Armenouhie," is in the November 2011 Issue of the Valley Scribe, the newsletter of the California Writers' Club, San Fernando Valley branch.

Thanks to Kathy Highcove. This one started out in Practice; thanks to all who critted it.

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Karen Lenfestey

My women's fiction novel, What Happiness Looks Like, is now available on Amazon as an e-book or paperback.

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Edith Parzefall

I'm still stunned by a dream come true after years of hard and fun work.

MuseItUp Publishing accepted my thriller, Strays of Rio. The tentative ebook release date is September 2012. The paperback should follow shortly afterwards.

A big thank you to everyone here who helped me forge this story into shape!

I'll shout again when the book is available.

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Bob Sanchez

I have a guest blog appearance over at Make Mine Mystery and would love it if you'd stop by and leave a comment.

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Wayne Scheer


"Root of All Evil" is this week's flash at Infective Ink. It was written in response to a Practice prompt: "I won. Now what?" Infective Ink also accepted my story, "Starting Over." They don't pay for flashes, but ten big ones are mine, all mine, for the short story. It was critiqued in Fiction, so thanks to all.

My story, "Buddies," has been accepted by Big Pulp for their March 2013 print issue. Yes, 2013. I had to email back to see if there was an error. That means I have $18 waiting for me if I live another year and a half. That's what I call incentive.

Also, my poem, "Shakespeare Might Have Had a Day Like This," is up at Foliate Oak Literary Magazine. I yahooed it once before, but I've since discovered it wasn't officially up until now. So, for those of you who like repetition, here it is again.

My story, "Little Man," is up at Long Story Short.

"The Staring Contest" is up at Sugar Mule. This one began in Practice a while back.

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Jack Shakely

I have just been informed that my memoir "Indian Me" has been awarded honorable mention in the Writer's Digest 80th annual Writing Competition memoir/personal essay category.

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Pat St. Pierre

Just received an acceptance that one of my photos will be on the cover of Decades Review and a second one will be under the photography section.

Will send link when available.

My flash fiction, "Pennies from Heaven," is now up at Long Story Short.


The Camel Saloon just accepted two of my poems. No publication date yet but will keep the group posted.

My very short flash fiction story, "Blindness," was yesterday's "Story of the Day" at One Forty Fiction. The requirements are a story in only 140 words, including spaces (quite a challenge). There is a place for comments on that page.

Notes For November 15th, 2011


This Day In Writing History

On November 15th, 1887, the famous American poet Marianne Moore was born in Kirkwood, Missouri. She was born in the living quarters of her grandfather's church. He was a Presbyterian minister. Marianne's father had walked out on the family before she was born, so she spent her early years living in her grandfather's home.

Marianne's grandfather died when she seven; her mother moved the family to Carlisle, Pennsylvania, where she began her education. After attending college and business school, Marianne taught at the Carlisle Indian School for several years. In 1915, when she was twenty-eight, her first published poem appeared.

Marianne continued to write and determined to become a professional poet. She and her mother moved to New York City, where she would become an assistant librarian at the New York Public Library. As her publication credits grew, with her works published in major literary magazines and newspapers, she was befriended by some of the greatest poets of the day, such as William Carlos Williams, H.D., (Hilda Dolittle) Wallace Stevens, and T.S. Eliot.

In 1919, she struck up a friendship with Ezra Pound, a fellow American poet famous for his poetry and controversial for his political views. She continued to write to him even after the end of the war, as he languished in a brutal military prison, serving time for treason. In the 1930s, he proclaimed his support for fascism and admiration of Italian dictator Benito Mussolini. During the war, he had lived in Rome and recorded propaganda radio broadcasts for Mussolini.

Although Marianne was politically conservative, she had denounced fascism long before America's entry into World War 2 and was revolted by Ezra Pound's anti-Semitism. Yet, she remained his friend. Pound would suffer a mental breakdown in prison, be declared insane, and transferred to a mental hospital.

Marianne Moore's first poetry collection, Poems, was published in London in 1921. It was actually published without her knowledge or consent by her friend H.D. as a surprise. When Marianne received her copy, she wasn't happy with the selection of poems, the editing, or the layout.

She continued to write and publish collections of her poetry, establishing herself as one of the finest poets of her generation. From 1925-29, she served as an editor for the famous literary magazine, The Dial (1840-1929). In 1931, the famous literary magazine Poetry (1912-present) awarded her the Helen Haire Levinson Prize.

Marianne became a celebrity among the New York literati. She was quite a character; whenever she went out, no matter what the occasion, she'd wear her trademark black cape and matching tricorn hat. She was a huge sports fan, and her favorite sports were baseball and boxing. She regularly attended ballgames and boxing matches. Her favorite boxer was Muhammad Ali, and she wrote the liner notes for his 1963 spoken word album, I Am The Greatest!

Marianne's fame also attracted the attention of the Ford Motor Company. The company's manager of marketing research asked her to name their newest car, a breakthrough model that they believed would make automotive history. Marianne came up with a list of names, including the Resilient Bullet, the Ford Silver Sword, the Varsity Stroke, the Andante con Moto, and the Utopian Turtletop.

None of Marianne's names for the new car were chosen. Instead, Ford named it the Edsel. The company was right - the Edsel did make automotive history. It was the worst American car ever made, and Ford lost millions of dollars on it.

In 1951, Marianne published her most famous book, Collected Poems. It won her numerous awards, including a Pultizer Prize. She was a Modernist poet who believed that love of language and heartfelt expression were more important than meter, as you can see in her classic poem, Poetry:

I, too, dislike it: there are things that are important
beyond all this fiddle.
Reading it, however, with a perfect contempt for it,
one discovers that there is in
it after all, a place for the genuine.
Hands that can grasp, eyes
that can dilate, hair that can rise
if it must, these things are important not be-
cause a

high sounding interpretation can be put upon them
but because they are
useful; when they become so derivative as to
become unintelligible, the
same thing may be said for all of us – that we
do not admire what
we cannot understand. The bat,
holding on upside down or in quest of some-
thing to

eat, elephants pushing, a wild horse taking a roll,
a tireless wolf under
a tree, the immovable critic twitching his skin like a
horse that feels a flea, the base-
ball fan, the statistician – case after case
could be cited did
one wish it; nor is it valid
to discriminate against "business documents
and

school-books;" all these phenomena are important.
One must make a distinction
however: when dragged into prominence by half
poets,
the result is not poetry,
nor till the autocrats among us can be
"literalists of
the imagination" – above
insolence and triviality and can present

for inspection, imaginary gardens with real toads
in them, shall we have
it. In the meantime, if you demand on one hand,
in defiance of their opinion –
the raw material of poetry in
all its rawness, and
that which is on the other hand,
genuine, then you are interested in poetry.



Quote Of The Day

"Any writer overwhelmingly honest about pleasing himself is almost sure to please others." - Marianne Moore


Vanguard Video

Today's video features a rare recording of Marianne Moore reading her classic poem, Bird-Witted. Enjoy!

Sunday, November 13, 2011

This Week's Practice Exercise

What You Don't Know (Version 2)
Prepared by Ruth Douillette
Posted: Sunday 13 November 2011
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Exercise: In 400 words or less, write a scene in which a character's secret is discovered, and show how that revelation causes others to behave in ways that reveal their true nature.

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People are not always what they seem. They keep secrets, hide skeletons in closets, or don't speak of an illness they have. On a less somber note, they may downplay their wealth or status, or keep an achievement quiet. When such a secret is revealed, other people react in various ways. Writers can use such a situation to add conflict to a plot and to show their readers more about the characters involved.

An example of such a revelation might be when a husband survives a plane crash, and the stunned wife discovers that he had been traveling with another woman with whom he had had a child years before. Such a revelation might change not only the marriage, but also the husband and wife. What would the actions of these people tell us about their character and their feelings?

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Exercise: In 400 words or less, write a scene in which a character's secret is discovered, and show how that revelation causes others to behave in ways that reveal their true nature.

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Critique by discussing how the revelation changes the perspectives of the characters involved. What is learned about the characters from their response to what has been uncovered? Does the piece work or not? And, if so, why? How could it be improved?

These exercises were written by IWW members and administrators to provide structured practice opportunities for its members. You are welcome to use them for practice as well. Please mention that you found them at the Internet Writing Workshop.

Friday, November 11, 2011

Notes For November 11th, 2011


This Day In Writing History

On November 11th, 1821, the legendary Russian novelist, essayist, and philosopher Fyodor Dostoevsky was born in Moscow, Russia. The second of six children, Fyodor's father Mikhail was a military surgeon and a violent alcoholic. He practiced at the Mariinsky Hospital for the Poor in Moscow. Although his parents forbade it, as a young boy, Fyodor would visit the patients in the hospital garden. He loved to listen to their stories.

Mikhail Dostoevsky was known to exercise despotic rule over his children. After coming home from work, he would take a nap and force his children to keep silent, stand by him while he slept, and swat any flies that came near his head.

In 1839, two years after losing his wife to tuberculosis, Mikhail died as well, supposedly from natural causes, though legend has it that his serfs, tired of his abuse, finally snapped during his latest violent, drunken rage and murdered him, restraining him and pouring vodka down his throat until he drowned.

In 1837, after his mother died, 16-year-old Fyodor Dostoevsky and his brother were sent to the Military Engineering Academy in Saint Petersburg, as their father was determined to make soldiers of them, even though Fyodor was epileptic - he suffered his first seizure at the age of nine.

He would use his experience with the condition to create epileptic characters in his novels, such as Prince Myshkin in The Idiot (1869) and Smerdyakov in The Brothers Karamazov. (1881)

At the Academy, Dostoevsky hated mathematics, but came to love literature as he studied the works of William Shakespeare, Victor Hugo, Blaise Pascal, and E.T.A. Hoffmann. He was a good student, did well on his exams, and graduated in 1841, receiving his commission. During his senior year, he wrote two romantic plays, influenced by the works of German playwright and poet Friedrich Schiller. Unfortunately, these early plays have been lost.

While serving in the army, (where he would be promoted to the rank of lieutenant) Dostoevsky translated Balzac's novel Eugenie Grandet into Russian. It received hardly any notice, so after he left the army in 1844, he began writing his own fiction.

The following year, his first work, an epistolary novella called Poor Folk, was published in the magazine Sovremennik (The Contemporary) and received great acclaim. Legend has it that poet Nikolai Nekrasov, the editor of Sovremennik, said of Dostoevsky, "A new Gogol has arisen!"

At the age of 24, Fyodor Dostoevsky had become a literary celebrity. Unfortunately, his second novel, The Double (1846) didn't fare as well as his first. The Double, a psychological study of a government clerk who goes mad, believing that a co-worker has stolen his identity and become his doppelganger, was trashed by critics, despite Dostoevsky's eerily accurate depiction of one man's descent into schizophrenia. After the failure of The Double, Dostoevsky's fame began to fade.

In 1849, while struggling to get his writing career back on track, Fyodor Dostoevsky suffered another devastating setback. He was arrested for being a member of the Petrashevsky Circle, a liberal intellectual group founded by Mikhail Petrashevsky, a follower of French utopian socialist Charles Fourier.

The Petrashevsky Circle opposed the czarist autocracy and Russian serfdom. Their members included writers, teachers, students, government officials, military officers, and others. Czar Nicholas I, fearful that the revolutions being waged in other countries would spread to Russia, mistakenly believed that the Petrashevsky Circle was a subversive revolutionary organization and ordered the arrest of its members.

After being forced to endure the psychological torture of a mock execution, Dostoevsky and his fellow Circle members had their death sentences commuted to prison terms. Dostoevsky was sentenced to four years of hard labor at a prison camp in Omsk, Siberia.

While serving his time at the squalid, freezing, and filthy prison camp, he became disillusioned with Western ideas and converted to Russian Orthodox Christianity, planting the seeds of the next phase of his literary career. He was released from prison in 1854 and returned to the Army, where he was required to serve in the Siberian Regiment.

Dostoevsky served for five years in the Regiment's Seventh Line Battalion, stationed at a fortress in Kazakhstan. While there, he began an affair with Maria Isayeva, the wife of an acquaintance from Siberia. He married her in 1857, after the death of her husband.

In 1859, the couple moved to Saint Petersburg, where Fyodor ran a series of unsuccessful literary magazines with his older brother, Mikhail. Their last magazine, Ephoka (Epoch) was shut down as the result of its coverage of the Polish Uprising of 1863.

The following year, Dostoevsky was devastated by the deaths of his wife and brother and plunged into depression and gambling addiction. Although he had published several memorable novels, including The Village Of Stepanchikovo (1859), The Insulted And Humiliated (1861), Notes From The House Of The Dead (1862), and Notes From Underground (1864), he gambled away what little he earned from them.

By 1865, he was broke. While working on Crime And Punishment, a novel that would become one of his masterpieces, he also wrote a novella called The Gambler in order to fulfill his contract and avoid losing his copyrights to his publisher. It was a grim drama about a tutor who plunges into the depths of gambling addiction, inspired by the author's own ordeal.

With the publication of Crime And Punishment in 1886, Fyodor Dostoevsky established himself as one of the greatest novelists of all time. The landmark novel told the story of Raskolnikov, a poor student who drops out and moves into a tiny room in Saint Petersburg.

Desperate for money, but too proud accept help from even his closest friend, Raskolnikov finally reaches his breaking point and decides to rob and murder Alena, a nasty, elderly moneylender. Unfortunately, Alena's half-sister Lizaveta walks in on the crime, forcing Raskolnikov to kill her as well. Tortured by guilt, Raskolnikov falls into an unbalanced state, drawing the suspicion of police detective Porfiry.

Raskolnikov falls in love with Sonya, a devout Christian woman driven to prostitution by her father. Seeing her as a spirit guide, Raskolnikov confesses his crime to Sonya. When she reads him the gospel story of Jesus raising Lazarus from the dead, Sonya gives Raskolnikov hope for his own redemption. He goes to the police, confesses, and is sent to a prison camp in Siberia. Sonya follows him, and the novel ends on a note of hope that Raskolnikov will be redeemed under her influence.

Dostoevsky would follow Crime And Punishment with another masterwork, The Idiot (1869). The tragic story of the love triangle between Christ-like, epileptic Prince Myshkin, fallen woman Nastasya Fillipovna, and Myshkin's friend Rogozhin, would not be translated into English until the 20th century.

In his tragic quest to defend her honor from ridicule and contempt, Prince Myshkin's love for Nastasya is a pure, Christian kind of love, while Rogozhin's love for her comes from lustful passion, which eventually drives him to murder and madness. Meanwhile, another man, Ganya, wants to marry Nastasya just for her dowry, with which he hopes to improve his social status.

Dostoevsky's last novel is considered by most to be his masterpiece - and one of the greatest novels of all time. The Brothers Karamazov (1881) is a deep, philosophical 750+ page epic novel that explores and debates the nature of God, morality, and free will. Part satire of human corruption, part a meditation on faith in an age of skepticism, and part murder mystery and courtroom thriller, the novel follows Fyodor Karamazov, a buffoonish, lecherous miser, and his grown sons.

When Fyodor is murdered, his oldest son Dmitri becomes the prime suspect. Each of the Karamazov brothers represents a part of the Russian character. Dmitri is a selfish lout, Ivan is a tortured intellectual, and Alyosha is the spiritual seeker. Although Alyosha is Dostoevsky's heroic prototype of the Christian idealist, the Church is not spared from criticism. As Russia stands on the brink of socialist revolution, Ivan presents one of the most potent criticisms of organized religion ever written.

Although much admired as a writer, Dostoevsky courted controversy with views that were considered anti-Semitic. In A Writer's Diary, a two volume collection of essays and short stories, he perceived the ethnocentrism and influence of Jewry in Russia's border regions as a threat to Russian peasants living in those areas.

However, he would later argue in favor of giving Jews equal rights in Russian society, advising Czar Alexander II to give Jews the right to assume positions of influence such as professorships at universities. He also expressed a desire to peacefully reconcile Christians and Jews so they could come together in brotherhood.

Fyodor Dostoevsky spent his last years living at the Staraya Russa resort in Northern Russia. He died of a lung hemorrhage from emphysema and an epileptic seizure on February 9th, 1881, at the age of 59. He still remains a major literary influence.


Quote Of The Day

"The cleverest of all, in my opinion, is the man who calls himself a fool at least once a month." - Fyodor Dostoevsky


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Today's video features a reading of the first chapter of Dostoevsky's existentialist novella Notes From Underground. Enjoy!


Thursday, November 10, 2011

Notes For November 10th, 2011


This Day In Writing History

On November 10th, 1973, copies of Slaughterhouse-Five, (1969) the classic novel by the legendary American writer Kurt Vonnegut, were burned by the administrators of a high school in Drake, North Dakota, as per the orders of the Drake School Board.

Slaughterhouse-Five, considered to be Vonnegut's masterpiece, was a landmark experimental novel. Opening during the Battle of the Bulge in the second World War, its main character is Billy Pilgrim, a poorly trained American soldier who hates war. Pilgrim is captured by the Nazis and becomes a prisoner of war. He and his comrades are interned in a prison camp whose quarters used to be a slaughterhouse.

Pilgrim soon finds himself "unstuck in time," as he travels through the past and the future, experiencing historical events out of sequence. His most memorable adventures include meeting a failed science fiction writer named Kilgore Trout, (who would return in Vonnegut's 1973 novel Breakfast of Champions) and being kidnapped by space aliens from the planet Tralfamadore, who exhibit him in their zoo, along with his "mate" - a porn starlet named Montana Wildhack.

Vonnegut's brilliant, fantastical, and scathing antiwar satire was controversial for its political themes. In addition to exploring the Allied extermination of thousands of German civilians in the Dresden bombings, the novel was one of the first major literary works to explore the fact that in addition to Jews, Gypsies, and political opponents, the Nazis also exterminated homosexuals during the Holocaust.

An English teacher at the Drake high school had assigned Slaughterhouse-Five to his students for classroom study. One student complained to her mother about profane language in the novel, and the disgruntled parent contacted the principal, who then brought the issue to the attention of the board of education.

The Drake School Board decided not only to ban Slaughterhouse-Five from the classroom and the school library, but also to confiscate students' personal copies of the novel and burn them. Most of the students refused to turn over their books, so school officials searched their lockers and took them.

All the seized copies of Slaughterhouse-Five (and other books banned by the Board, including James Dickey's classic suspense thriller Deliverance) were tossed into the school's furnace and burned.

When Kurt Vonnegut learned that copies of his novel had been burned, he wrote the following to a member of the Drake School Board:

Dear Mr. McCarthy:

I am writing to you in your capacity as chairman of the Drake School Board. I am among those American writers whose books have been destroyed in the now famous furnace of your school.

If you were to bother to read my books, to behave as educated persons would, you would learn that they are not sexy, and do not argue in favor of wildness of any kind. They beg that people be kinder and more responsible than they often are. It is true that some of the characters speak coarsely. That is because people speak coarsely in real life.

If you and your board are now determined to show that you in fact have wisdom and maturity when you exercise your powers over the education of your young, then you should acknowledge that it was a rotten lesson you taught young people in a free society when you denounced and then burned books — books you hadn't even read. You should also resolve to expose your children to all sorts of opinions and information, in order that they will be better equipped to make decisions and to survive.

Again: you have insulted me, and I am a good citizen, and I am very real.

Nine years later, in the case of Island Trees School District v. Pico (1982), the U.S. Supreme Court ruled that the First Amendment limits the authority of school boards to remove books from middle and high school libraries.

Students had sued the Island Trees School Board over their decision to ban Slaughterhouse-Five and other books, which the Board had declared "anti-American, anti-Christian, anti-[Semitic], and just plain filthy."

Public burnings of books still take place in the United States. Most recently, church groups have conducted public burnings of J.K. Rowling's series of Harry Potter fantasy novels, which they accuse of encouraging children to practice real witchcraft and dabble in devil worship.


Quote Of The Day

"Any reviewer who expresses rage and loathing for a novel is preposterous. He or she is like a person who has put on full armor and attacked a hot fudge sundae." - Kurt Vonnegut


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Today's video features Kurt Vonnegut in a 2005 interview on the PBS program NOW, talking about Slaughterhouse-Five. Enjoy!


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